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Post by laura on Oct 27, 2009 14:57:34 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Oct 27, 2009 15:18:59 GMT
X by 10 in the city feelin all grity were'm I going were have I bin Was it today or tommorow or yesterday, What time was on the meeter, what street was I meant to be on if i go this way will it be quicker, maybee it would be cheaper if I just became a street sweaper, run with the beat shuffle my feat, dance to the beat, All about the money and aint a dam thing funny got cash in this world of milk and honey............. (Altogether now) dont push me cause am close to the edge, am trying not to lose my head, like jungle sometimes makes me wonder what keeps me from going under
Laura
Thats my effort off the top of my dome that poems good this is like poetry corner get on my beer crate it great.
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Post by andy12345 on Oct 27, 2009 19:07:41 GMT
Andy's potential ADHD poem....... ............. Hope you enjoyed it
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Post by Deleted on Oct 27, 2009 19:15:41 GMT
Very good all, we have genius poets in our mist. Id try doing a poem but id flit all the way though it wouldnt make sense.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 27, 2009 19:42:25 GMT
That was me head to day shreeded wheat to many things going on bad day of illustrated limitations.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2009 0:18:54 GMT
Safensound - that poem is in deperate need of a soundtrack - seriously, I think it's meant to be a song...
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Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2009 9:04:36 GMT
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